My most obvious problem with this is that it just looks like you're copying the ones you found last week on the internet... rather than seeing that this is a conclusion or position you have come to on your own, or through research. I think we probably need to talk about this, or perhaps you could write something here. I need to know more about the terms you're using, why those terms, why they exist in relation to each other the way they do?
But again this is good because at last the work is beginning to create questions! Which gets back to what we were saying in the middle of the year about 'just making work'... it's a way to get started, but now you need to let the questions in the work lead you somewhere...
25 September 2007 at 09:05
My most obvious problem with this is that it just looks like you're copying the ones you found last week on the internet... rather than seeing that this is a conclusion or position you have come to on your own, or through research. I think we probably need to talk about this, or perhaps you could write something here. I need to know more about the terms you're using, why those terms, why they exist in relation to each other the way they do?
But again this is good because at last the work is beginning to create questions! Which gets back to what we were saying in the middle of the year about 'just making work'... it's a way to get started, but now you need to let the questions in the work lead you somewhere...
L